In Chapter 5, you have "Fire bees". That should either be "obscured FireBees and buildings" or the more amusing "obscured fire, bees, and buildings" <g>
And just a comment on Chapter 4:
Yelena Brzezinski. She'd been 25.She was just cast in Hamilton and was violently killed before her time. Now that's irony.
A singer and dancer who'd just received her first big break by getting cast in a production on MegaTokyo's equivalent of Broadway. It was a revival of a musical that I'd never heard of, first produced twenty years earlier in 2016. She'd gone to the Replicants concert with her boyfriend to celebrate getting the part. The boyfriend was in the hospital, in serious condition but expected to make it.
Reread has been very fun so far, thanks again for writing!