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## I woke to the sound of fluttering wings and reflexively began to feel around. All I found in my bed was a hallow space that was still warm.
In addition to the usual student’s compliment of stationary, workbooks and supplies,
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robkelk wrote:While re-reading to see what the changes were, I noticed a couple of possible typos in one section. In any other story, I'd be sure they are typos, but ... it's Zeke.## I woke to the sound of fluttering wings and reflexively began to feel around. All I found in my bed was a hallow space that was still warm.Is Zeke starting to think of Deimos as a demigoddes, or should "hallow" be "hollow" there?In addition to the usual student’s compliment of stationary, workbooks and supplies,As opposed to those mobile workbooks and supplies... Maybe some of his notes do wander off, and these are the others?
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Black Aeronaut wrote:Long story short, they succeed, and the result is reformatted Droids, entirely different from their previous incarnations. Zeke feels it's best if they take on disguise-forms as small vehicles such as mopeds, scooters, and even smaller things like drone-aircraft, computers, backpacks... and even one in the form of a hand-canon. For some reason, Zeke feels an irresistible urge to call them 'Minicons'. ;)
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robkelk wrote:Maybe it's because I have a big monitor, but I'm already reducing the size of the font in the story thread... Meh. Your thread, your choice.
robkelk wrote:The Invader stuff: You've already got a full plate with the story elements you've mentioned. Adding another might be overkill - or it might be something to bring disparate elements together.
robkelk wrote:The most recent installment: Since it's been mentioned in-story, why do I get the feeling that Naru being the only "normal" one is going to be important in the future? (glances at the copy of A Certain Scientific Railgun on the table)
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