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01/10/11 11:15 PM
Jorlem wrote:Ah, sorry. I think that part of the problem I had with the power levels might have been because I'm seeing this in a planning forum, not in the story itself. That is, I'm seeing what you plan as the end result, and not the progression you intend to get there. Also, when I read the word 'Avatar', a part of me makes a sort of mental jump to Aang's avatar state, which I shouldn't be doing. I had enjoyed the chapters that you had written previously, and thought the power levels shown in story were ok, from what I recall. It was what was discussed in the comments that rang a few of my alarm bells IIRC.Also, if Zeke is a Whispered, then I can see that being a decent source of conflict with the UEC once it is revealed. Something along the lines of "If you hadn't been born a Whispered, I would have been the one that Raven would have picked!" Heck, this could be what drives him all the way to fully joining with Amalgam.Anyway, sorry.
paladindythe wrote:You should probably keep that around as an omake. I'm imagining everyone super-deformed and stuff.
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