Did a quick once-over of the story.  Will read it again later, focused on the Grover's Corner bits for definition.  Do you have anything you want pictured?

ETA:  I could really use a sense of scale.  How big should that garage be?  If you look, it's freaking ginormous (there's a '36 coupe on the pad to the left).
  

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